Dad wavers

Dad wavers

• Description
• Action
• Dialogue
• Where
• Adverb

•  Verb

•  Estimation of time

•  Rhetorical question
  its i bit hard but would it be easy for you?

•   Simile

My story

He is in a high in scaffolding on a cylinder like building is above  the city
where it is cold and cloudy.

He wanted to take a photo but his foot slipped he was thinking this will be a
better photo so he took one hand off slowly scared that he was going to fall.

Why do i want to take the photo the scaffolding was getting wet.

I looked down i could barely see the ground his other hand was slipping he
had to think quickly then oh no he started to fall  he looked down saintly a
rope fell down beside him.

He grabbed the rope tightly he was hanging on and pulling himself up he
looked around but he couldn’t see because it was misty he then got back up
and out of nowhere this boy apers and ask him if he wanted to go bungee
jumping.

He said maybe tomorrow the boy said how about tomorrow no know if its ok
yip i'll just get the stuff.

then shows set down over the hole city he got back and i was asleep so after
a bit here went to sleep.

He got up the next day and asked himself why am i going to do this he was
scared of what was going to happen next.

He lept forwards like a cat falling like a falcon.

The bongy bounced him back he wanted to get up and go again.